Your email is often the first impression you make on recruiters, professors, and professional connections. This comprehensive guide teaches you to write emails that get responses, build relationships, and advance your career.
In both academic and professional settings, email remains the primary mode of formal communication. A well-written email can open doors, while a careless one can close them forever.
This guide covers everything from basic etiquette rules to advanced techniques for cold outreach, follow-ups, and workplace communication. By the end, you'll write emails that get read, get responses, and get results.
Before diving into templates and techniques, get these basics right:
Create a professional signature that includes:
Example Signature:
Best regards,
Rahul Sharma
B.Tech Computer Science, IIT Delhi (2024)
linkedin.com/in/rahulsharma | +91 98765 43210
Your subject line is the gatekeeper. A boring subject means your email may never be opened.
For Applications
"Application for [Role] - [Your Name], [College]"
For Follow-Ups
"Following up: [Original Subject]"
For Networking
"[Mutual Connection] suggested I reach out"
For Cold Outreach
"Quick question about [specific topic at their company]"
For Thank You Emails
"Thank you - [Role] Interview"
Every professional email should follow this structure:
"Dear [Name]," or "Hi [Name]," depending on formality
Who you are and why you're writing. Get to the point immediately.
Main content with specific details. Use bullet points for readability.
What do you want them to do? Be specific and make it easy to respond.
Express gratitude, offer to provide more info, sign off professionally.
Match your tone to the recipient and the situation:
| Situation | Greeting | Sign-off |
|---|---|---|
| Very Formal | "Dear Mr./Ms. [Last Name]," | "Respectfully," |
| Formal (most business) | "Dear [First Name]," | "Best regards," |
| Semi-Formal | "Hi [First Name]," | "Best," or "Thanks," |
| Casual (colleagues) | "Hey [First Name]," | "Cheers," or "Thanks!" |
Subject: Application for [Role] Intern - [Your Name], [College]
Dear [Hiring Manager Name/Team],
I am a [Year] [Major] student at [College], and I am excited to apply for the [Role] internship at [Company].
[1-2 sentences about why you're a fit—mention specific skills or projects relevant to their work]
I've attached my resume and would love the opportunity to discuss how I can contribute to your team.
Thank you for considering my application.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
[Phone] | [LinkedIn]
Subject: Thank You - [Role] Interview
Dear [Interviewer Name],
Thank you for taking the time to speak with me today about the [Role] position. I genuinely enjoyed learning about [specific topic you discussed—shows you were listening].
Our conversation reinforced my enthusiasm for the role and [Company]. I'm particularly excited about [specific aspect of the role or company].
Please don't hesitate to reach out if you need any additional information from me.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Subject: Research Opportunity Inquiry - [Your Name], [Course/Department]
Dear Professor [Last Name],
I am [Your Name], a [Year] [Major] student in your [Course Name] class. I have been fascinated by [specific topic from their research/lectures] and would love to explore opportunities to get involved in your research.
I have experience in [relevant skills/coursework], and I believe I could contribute to [specific project or area].
Would you be available for a brief meeting to discuss potential opportunities? I am flexible with timing.
Thank you for your time.
[Your Name]
Subject: [Mutual Connection] suggested I reach out
Hi [First Name],
I hope this email finds you well. [Mutual Connection] mentioned that you might be a great person to connect with regarding [specific topic or career path].
I'm currently a [Role/Student] at [Company/University], exploring opportunities in [field]. I'd love to learn about your experience at [Their Company].
Would you have 15-20 minutes for a quick call in the coming weeks? I'm happy to work around your schedule.
Thanks so much for considering!
[Your Name]
Subject: Re: [Role] Offer - Acceptance
Dear [Hiring Manager],
Thank you very much for offering me the [Role] position at [Company]. I am thrilled to accept and excited to join the team.
As discussed, I understand my start date will be [Date] with a starting salary of [Amount]. Please let me know if you need any documentation or if there are any next steps before my start date.
I look forward to contributing to [Company] and working with the team.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Most emails don't get responses the first time. Strategic follow-ups are essential.
Subject: Following up: [Original Subject]
Hi [Name],
I wanted to follow up on my email from [date] regarding [topic]. I understand you're likely very busy.
[Brief 1-line reminder of your original request]
Please let me know if you need any additional information from me.
Thanks,
[Your Name]
Cold emails to people you don't know require special care:
Once you're in a professional environment, additional rules apply:
❌ Vague subject lines
"Hi," "Query," "Help" tell the recipient nothing about content.
❌ Too long
People don't read long emails. Be concise.
❌ Typos and grammar errors
Shows carelessness. Always proofread.
❌ Wrong recipient name
Nothing says "copy-paste" like addressing someone by the wrong name.
❌ No call-to-action
If you don't ask for something specific, you won't get it.
❌ Sending angry emails
Never send an email when emotional. Draft it, wait a day, then revise.
❌ Forgetting attachments
Mention attachments in the first line so you don't forget.
Grammarly
Catch typos, grammar errors, and tone issues
Hemingway Editor
Simplify complex sentences for clarity
Boomerang
Schedule emails for optimal send times
Hunter.io
Find professional email addresses
Mailtrack
Track if and when emails are opened
Calendly
Include in emails to simplify scheduling
Many professionals check email on phones. Optimize accordingly:
When should I follow up on an email?
Wait 3-5 business days for normal inquiries, 5-7 days for job applications. Don't follow up more than 2-3 times total.
Should I use emojis in professional emails?
Avoid in first contact with professionals. Once you have rapport, occasional emojis may be okay depending on workplace culture.
What if I sent an email with a typo?
If it's minor, let it go. If it's significant (wrong name, wrong company), send a brief apology and correction.
Should I use "Dear Sir/Madam"?
Avoid if possible. Take 2 minutes to find the person's name. If truly unknown, use "Dear Hiring Team" or "Hello."
How long should a professional email be?
5-7 sentences is ideal. If longer is necessary, use bullet points and clear formatting so it's scannable.
Is it okay to send emails late at night?
Generally avoid—it may set unrealistic expectations. Use scheduling tools to send during business hours.
Every email you send is a reflection of your professionalism, attention to detail, and communication skills. In a world of instant messaging, a well-crafted email stands out.
Take the extra minute to structure your thoughts, proofread your message, and consider how it will be received. It's a small investment that pays dividends throughout your career.
Great communication opens doors. Master it. 📧
Written by Sproutern Career Team
Based on feedback from recruiters, hiring managers, and communication experts.
Regularly updated